odd writing
the place for all weird ramblings as created by the mad mind of tbaoo ..
Jun 17, 2012
it was dark and wet {2}
the darkest and wettest part of the ship had a design about it that denied its real purpose. the featureless walls, floors and ceiling did not really welcome human entry, but it wasn’t designed for that. it was the secret place that trevor had built. a back up in case of his own untimely demise. more ?
By tbaoo Category: moony & carol Tags: carol and moony are asleep, carol must be discarded, droid 78 stirs, the space palace in the stars
Jun 11, 2012
i have to try some dialogue {13}
i’ve an admission. i’m addicted to blogging. watching and enjoying the huge range of blogs, but sadly skimming over plenty. it’s this plenty that i should read more of. i’m also getting pretty focused about trying to write something everyday, something fictional and something odd. it is an odd blog after all. i manage odd quite well i think. one of the hundreds of things i need to learn to improve in my stumbling writing style, is to incorporate dialogue into my ramblings. so here is an attempt to do just that …. more ?
By tbaoo Category: random Tags: spoken word at tbaoo, tbaoo and his silly friends, trying some dialogue, what is tbaoo's writing really about
Jun 10, 2012
moony learnt to fly in australia {2}
history would show that moony and carol were very much the beginning. they were the beginning of the end. those that cared about their life, should have been very pleased that those two “less than startling” minds of 2140 had got together and endured the chaos of the space palace in the stars. more ?
By tbaoo Category: moony & carol Tags: alice springs, grew up in port lincoln, moony is a polite pilot, moony learns to fly
Jun 1, 2012
which side is starboard {2}
nobby left trevor with a bad taste in his mouth, a stench in his nostrils and a stain on his chair. all in all, it wasn’t the worst that could have happened. nobby had been known to dissect his cause of annoyance with a laser knife and spread the remains all over the nearest wall, trevor’s wall remained spotless. more ?
By tbaoo Category: moony & carol Tags: carol and moony, it's goodbye to kevin, there is a second chance, trevor survives nobby's visit
May 30, 2012
nobby arrives and leaves a stain {8}
robert had seen the eye and of course the eye had seen him. it sent a micro second message to the ship and the ship sent the wiring. this wiring despatch and it’s subsequent arrival only took two seconds. these last two seconds of robert’s life were rather intense. more ?
By tbaoo Category: moony & carol Tags: moony and carol continue, nobby is angry, the air is thick with detail, trevor is flatulent
